I am a Year 3 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Davan is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you.
Hi Julia, We are Room 5 at St Mary's school in Gisborne. I love how you used the colourful flower, says Chloe. I like how you used the picture that looks like a laser, says Isaac. I like the font you chose, says Abiya. Maybe you could make the fancy font a bit bigger next time so it's easier to read says Kymani. Did you choose a theme for your post and was it rainbow? Asks Laney. From Room 5.
Hi Julia,
ReplyDeleteWe are Room 5 at St Mary's school in Gisborne.
I love how you used the colourful flower, says Chloe.
I like how you used the picture that looks like a laser, says Isaac.
I like the font you chose, says Abiya.
Maybe you could make the fancy font a bit bigger next time so it's easier to read says Kymani.
Did you choose a theme for your post and was it rainbow? Asks Laney.
From Room 5.
Kia ora room 5
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yes it is a rainbow because i love rainbows
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